Round 2 FeedbackFight 1: Esquire vs Fran (Avatarjk137 versus Fluffyturtle) (0 - 5 + 1 ABSTAIN)Avatarjk137--- Had to skim this entry to get through it. Halfway through the entry, I realized that the fight hadn't even started yet. While I appreciate humor and good dialogue, I'd like to get the point quickly. Brevity is the soul of wit, etc. etc. Unlike the opponent's entry, this turned out to be just another old fashioned beat 'em up.--- Well, where to start? I think the sister arc didn't make too much sense, was out-of-place and could well have been excluded from the final product altogether. The killing random tourists scene in particular felt needless
the wall-eyes, i shoulda known.
OMG THIS IS GOING TO BE EXTREME